Friday, June 28, 2019

Review: Once Upon a Bad Boy

Once Upon a Bad Boy Once Upon a Bad Boy by Melonie Johnson
My rating: 5 of 5 stars

Melonie Johnson's "Once Upon a Bad Boy" was an excellent second chance romance, and I loved it. It seemed to have a somewhat different, more serious tone than the first two books in the series, but still managed to be charming and incorporate some humorous moments.

I adored Sadie, the female lead character. She seemed so down-to-earth despite growing up wealthy and becoming successful as an actress. I really admired her strength and independence, as well as her ability to stand up for herself, her choices, and what she believed in despite her own insecurities and what other people might think. In addition, it was great to learn more about Sadie's friendship with Ana. I liked them and their banter in the first two books of the series, but their special relationship really shines in this story.

I also loved the male main character, Bo. From the beginning, he comes across as a great guy and still seems to care about Sadie, so at first it was tough for me to understand why he broke up with her back when they were teenagers. As it turns out, Bo really is a pretty great guy and his reasons for ending things with Sadie were understandable, given their ages at the time. They were so young back then, and their different family circumstances probably seemed insurmountable at the time. Only with maturity and life experience did Bo come to realize that the external trappings of Sadie's family's wealth didn't matter and shouldn't be a reason to keep them apart.

The secondary characters featured in this book were wonderful too, particularly Sadie's grandma and Bo's adorable nephew, Toby. Bo's sister, Luna, was intriguing as well. She didn't come across as very likeable at first, but as I got to know and understand her a bit better, I sympathized with her more and more. (It seems to me like she might need a HEA of her own!)

I am definitely looking forward to Melonie Johnson's next book.

*ARC provided by the publisher via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.

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Review: The Lemon Sisters

The Lemon Sisters The Lemon Sisters by Jill Shalvis
My rating: 5 of 5 stars

"The Lemon Sisters" by Jill Shalvis was a wonderful novel featuring well-developed, realistic, and likeable characters. They were each flawed, but that made them seem so much more human to me. All of them felt so real and were so vividly described that it was easy for me to imagine being friends with them in real life.

My favorite part of the story was the relationship between the titular Lemon sisters, Brooke and Mindy. They had to work to find their way back to each other, but I loved that they always looked out for each other and had each other's backs in spite of their differences. The fact that Brooke dropped everything to care for Mindy's kids even though they hadn't talked in a year spoke volumes about their love for each other. I appreciated that they understood the importance of family, which is something near and dear to my own heart.

The central romantic relationships in the book were also well-developed. Linc's shock regarding Mindy's feelings was obvious, and certainly believable. I was so happy that they were able to work things out because they seemed like such an adorable couple. Additionally, Linc and Mindy's kids, especially Millie, made for great secondary characters and added some much needed humor at key moments in the book.

As for Brooke and Garrett, their story broke my heart and put it back together several times over the course of the book. Just when I thought they were getting closer and might finally be able to figure out a way to make their relationship work, something else would happen to pull them in different directions once again. When they finally did work things out, I wanted to cheer. They really seemed to bring out the best in each other, and after everything they went through both together and apart, they really deserved to find happiness.

Finally, I adored the book's epilogue. It was exactly what I was hoping would happen almost from the very beginning, and was a lovely way to wrap things up for all of these delightful characters.

Bottom line: I loved this book and highly recommend it. I think it may be my new favorite by Jill Shalvis! I really hope she plans to continue writing books in the Wildstone series because they just keep getting better and better.

*ARC provided by the publisher via Edelweiss in exchange for an honest review.

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Tuesday, June 25, 2019

Blog Tour: Happy Book Birthday to Emily March's "Jackson"!


I have been a fan of Emily March's writing for many years, so I am very excited to be participating in the blog tour celebrating "Jackson," the latest release in her Eternity Springs series.  Eternity Springs is one of the rare series that has maintained its quality even after more than 15 books, and I always look forward to catching up with old friends and meeting new ones.

About "Jackson"

From New York Times bestselling author Emily March comes Jackson, the newest novel in the critically acclaimed Eternity Springs series.

Sometimes it takes a new beginning
Caroline Carruthers thinks she buried her dreams along with the love of her life…until a stranger named Celeste dares her to chase a dream all on her own. Moving to Redemption, Texas, is chapter one in Caroline’s new life story. Opening a bookstore is the next. Finding love is the last thing on her mind as she settles into this new place called home. But when she meets a handsome, soulful man who’s also starting over, all bets are off.

to reach a happily-ever-after
Jackson McBride came to Redemption looking only to find himself, not someone to love. Ever since his marriage ended, he’s been bitter. Sure, he used to believe in love—he even has the old song lyrics to prove it—but the Jackson of today is all business. That is, until a beautiful young widow who’s moved to town inspires a change of heart. Could it be that the myth of Redemption’s healing magic is true…and Jackson and Caroline can find a second chance at a happy ending after all?

Check out an excerpt of "Jackson" here!

https://us.macmillan.com/books/9781250314918

My Review

The great thing about the Eternity Springs books is that each one stands very well on its own for readers who do not have previous experience with the series, while also allowing longtime fans the opportunity to check in with favorite characters from past stories.  That is particularly true of "Jackson" since it is the launch of a spinoff trilogy featuring the three McBride cousins of Texas, who are distant relations of the Callahan family featured in a number of Ms. March's previous novels.

As the story begins, Boone, Jackson, and Tucker McBride have inherited a large parcel of land just outside Redemption, Texas and must come up with a way to make it turn a profit since the terms of their great-aunt's will prohibit them from selling the land outside the family.  With the help of Boone's friend from Eternity Springs, Celeste Blessing, the McBrides decide to renovate some of the property's existing buildings and turn them into a destination resort and music venue.  Jackson, a former songwriter and musician who is reeling in the wake of losing a contentious custody battle with his pop star ex-wife, moves to Redemption to oversee the project.  He soon befriends Caroline Carruthers, a recent widow and fellow new resident of the town who plans to begin the "next chapter" of her life by opening a bookstore.  Slowly, Jackson and Caroline's friendship evolves into something more, though there are numerous challenges to be faced on their path to happiness.

I always enjoy a slow burn romance, and Caroline and Jackson's relationship was a great example of that.  They both had a lot of baggage to overcome as a result of their previous marriages, and I liked that they took their time not only to work through those issues, but to get to know each other and form a friendship before their relationship turned romantic.  Caroline and Jackson really seemed like a good match for each other, and I loved how they were so supportive of each other's hopes and dreams.  I also enjoyed watching Caroline's relationship with Jackson's daughter, Haley, evolve.  Haley was a really sweet little girl and a fun secondary character in this story.

I also liked how Ms. March handled the resolution of Jackson's custody battle with his ex-wife, Sharon.  I was prepared to hate Sharon for how she treated Jackson during the custody battle, but Ms. March actually managed to redeem her character for me by the end of the book.  (In fact, she did such a good job that I wouldn't mind reading a future story about Sharon!)  In the end, I was just happy that everything worked out so that Jackson and his daughter could be in each other's lives.

Overall, "Jackson" was yet another enjoyable installment in the Eternity Springs series, and I look forward to the next one.

*ARC provided by the publisher via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.

Tuesday, June 18, 2019

Blog Tour: Happy Release Week to Avery Flynn's "Parental Guidance"!

I am super excited to be participating in the blog tour celebrating Avery Flynn's latest novel, "Parental Guidance," book #1 in the Ice Knights series. This is the first book I have ever read by Avery Flynn, but it definitely won't be the last.  The cover and description really drew me in, and I couldn't wait to read it.  It turned out to be a sweet, funny, and sexy story with endearing, well-developed characters that I loved.  I highly recommend "Parental Guidance" and can't wait to see what the next book in this series brings!

About "Parental Guidance"

All I want is to play hockey on the Ice Knights, instead, I’m in a viral video for all the wrong reasons and my mom—yes, my mom—has taken over my dating apps. Then, when I think it can’t get any worse, the fates deliver Zara Ambrose, a five-feet-nothing redhead with more freckles than inches and who’d rather be anywhere other than on a date with me.

Now a bet with her friends and my PR nightmare have us both stuck in this go-on-five-dates-with-the-same-person hell situation. But if we band together, we can get the whole thing over with and go on with our lives. It’s perfect! No feelings. No future. No fuc— *ahem* fun. No naked fun.

What could go wrong? Nothing—as long as I remember the rules. Don’t notice the way she looks in a dress. Don’t react when she does that little shivery sigh thing whenever we touch. Don’t think about the fact that she’s never had a toe-curling orgasm that wasn’t self-delivered and just how badly I want to change that.

Five dates—that’s it—and then we go our separate ways. At least, that was the plan.

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/43967624-parental-guidance

Read an Excerpt from "Parental Guidance"

“So why are you on Bramble?”

She took another small bite from her roll before answering. “My best friend is blackmailing me, and my dad wants a SAG card.”

That was definitely not the answer he’d been expecting. “And I thought my reasoning was twisted.”

“I’m sure it all makes sense in Gemma’s head,” Zara said. “She thinks I work too much and need to loosen up. She’ll let me be her plus-one to go meet a collector if I do the Bramble five dates thing. And my dad? Well, let’s just say he’s never met an unlikely plan he didn’t think he could pull off.”

All the possibilities this created sped around inside his head until one broke free like a perfect fast break late in the third period when the game was on the line. All he had to do was put the biscuit in the net.

“So neither of us really wants to be here,” he said. “We’re each other’s solution to getting back to our regular lives as soon as possible.”

It was fucking perfect. Petrov’s job with the team would be safe for another season—well, as safe as he could be, considering he didn’t have a no-trade deal in his contract.

Zara, though, didn’t seem to be seeing the genius of it, going by the suspicious look she gave him as she took another bite of her roll. Instead of giving him a straight-up no, though, she started eating. The words—okay, begging pleas—were bubbling up inside him but for once, he kept it in lockdown. He wasn’t about to rush this play, no matter how it had every nerve in his body jinglejangling.

Finally, she used her napkin to wipe the corners of her mouth, straightened her spine, and looked him dead in the eye. “We’d have to have ground rules.”

“Sure. Whatever you want.” Ice Knights season tickets? He’d make that happen. A photo op with her dad’s favorite player? Done. Whatever it took, he’d do it.

“This isn’t a real or fake relationship, it’s a temporary alliance,” she said without an ounce of humor in her tone. “I’m not pretending to be your girlfriend or the random chick you’re banging this week.”

“Agreed.” All of that sounded like it would cause more problems than it would solve anyway. “I’ve got a condition. Dressing up is not required. I’m not putting on a suit.”

The best thing about the off-season was not having to strangle himself with a tie multiple times a week just for a bus ride to the rink or a plane trip to another city. Coach Peppers was old-fashioned about doing things the original way.

“Fine.” Zara held up three fingers. “The third stipulation is that I’m not putting on a good attitude. If it’s been a crappy day, I don’t have to pretend to be a manic pixie dream girl.”

He snorted. “No one who’s met you would believe that. You’re a little salty.” That was putting it mildly based on her attitude when she showed up for their date.

“I have my reasons.” She added another finger, so she was holding up four. “Oh, and no making love. Sex?” She paused and looked him over quickly. “Maybe. Emotional, heartfelt, staring-each-other-in-the-eyes making love? Not gonna happen. No offense, but you’re not my type.”

What the hell? Not her type? He was a professional athlete making millions. He’d been led to believe he was everyone’s type.

“Not a problem, since I don’t think we could see eye to eye while having sex unless you magically grew a foot,” he said.

“You’re not into being creative?” Zara rolled her eyes. “I guess that’s expected for someone who has probably had women throwing themselves at him for years. You haven’t ever had to work for it.”

Caleb had no idea what to say to that. He’d been punched square in the face by the most feared goons in hockey and it hadn’t knocked him as senseless as this little five-foot-nothing of a snarky woman had done with a few choice words.

“I have one more rule,” she said, reaching for another roll. “Five dates and we’re done. Period. Do we have a deal?”


My Review 

As previously mentioned, I was really looking forward to reading "Parental Guidance," and it was totally worth the wait.  It might have been helpful for me to have read Flynn's Hartigans series first since there seems to be some overlap with the characters, but I didn't feel lost at all without the additional background those books may have provided.

I'm not usually a fan of sports romances (or much of a hockey fan in general), but this book was so well-written and engaging that I didn't mind the sports element.  Hockey was a big part of Caleb's life and the overarching story without being overwhelming or confusing for someone like me, who doesn't have much knowledge of the sport.  There were no drawn-out descriptions of practices or games, just enough details about Caleb's training regimen and travel schedule to make me understand what his life was like, and how it would impact his potential romantic relationship with Zara.

I thought that the idea for the dating app, which integrated insight and advice from users' parents, was very unique and interesting, though it was somewhat unclear to me if parents and post-date conversations/videos were always a part of the process, or if they were just part of the publicity campaign set up by Caleb's team to draw attention away from the viral video.  Either way, Zara and Caleb's parents ended up playing very important roles in the story, which I enjoyed.  Zara's father, in particular, added a lot of humor and heart, as well as important insight into Zara's childhood and character.

Overall, much like Caleb's Ice Knights, "Parental Guidance" is a winner!

*ARC provided by the publisher via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.

Monday, June 17, 2019

Review: The Friend Zone

The Friend Zone The Friend Zone by Abby Jimenez
My rating: 5 of 5 stars

I was incredibly excited when I heard that Abby Jimenez was writing this book. I first learned of Abby's wit and charm through social media posts related to her bakery, and after reading a description for "The Friend Zone," I couldn't wait to get my hands on it. Thankfully, the wait was more than worth it - I LOVED this book! I hated that real life kept interrupting me because I didn't want to put it down. I laughed, I cried, and I fell in love with each and every one of these characters.

There is so much I want to say about this book, but at the same time I don't want to say much at all because I wouldn't want to ruin the twists and turns for those who have not yet read it. Generally speaking, however, the writing is excellent and incredibly mature. I found it difficult to believe that it was actually a debut novel! Also, I love how the book manages to be both funny and poignant at the same time. It deals with a number of very serious subjects, but delicately and realistically.

I am so happy that Abby is writing a follow-up to this book! I can't wait to find out what happens to these characters next.

*ARC provided by the publisher via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.

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Sunday, June 16, 2019

Review: Waiting for Tom Hanks

Waiting for Tom Hanks Waiting for Tom Hanks by Kerry Winfrey
My rating: 2 of 5 stars

Based on the description, I was really looking forward to reading "Waiting for Tom Hanks" by Kerry Winfrey, but unfortunately, I just don't think I can recommend it. My biggest frustration with this book was that the main character, Annie, was not very likeable. I felt bad for her because of the trauma of losing her parents at such a young age, but that didn't entirely make up for her selfishness or total fixation on romantic comedies. Bottom line: Annie just wasn't very interesting. All she seemed to have in her life was her interest in rom-coms. It didn't seem like she had ever developed interests besides those, which made her character seem pretty one-dimensional to me.

I didn't buy the "enemies to lovers" angle of this story either. I never got the impression that Drew had any negative feelings towards Annie, and Annie's "negative" feelings towards Drew seemed exaggerated and unnecessary. There was really no reason for her to dislike him. I could see why Annie might have felt embarrassed after spilling coffee on Drew at their first meeting, but the strong feelings of dislike she expressed were way out of proportion to the situation. Annie didn't know Drew at all, apart from some questionable gossip from Hollywood tabloids, so how could she truly dislike him?

As for Drew "making fun" of Annie, I didn't get the impression that was what he was doing at all. Teasing her, sure, but there didn't seem to be any malicious intent behind what he was saying. He was definitely a joker and seemed to have a tendency not to take things seriously, but again, he really didn't seem to do anything that was mean-spirited, to Annie or anyone else. Overall, Drew seemed like a nice enough, decent guy, especially for a fairly popular actor. He easily could have come across as much more of an egotistical jerk in his dealings with Annie and many other characters.

So what exactly did I like about this book? The secondary characters were mostly likeable, especially Annie's Uncle Don and best friend Chloe. Unfortunately, they were n0t enough to save this book for me. While I enjoyed the banter and relationship potential between Chloe and her boss, coffee shop owner Nick, I'm not sure it was enough to make me want to read the next book in this series.

It's really a shame. There was a lot of potential in this story, but in the end it left me very disappointed.

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Saturday, June 15, 2019

Review: The Summer of Sunshine and Margot

The Summer of Sunshine and Margot The Summer of Sunshine and Margot by Susan Mallery
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

Susan Mallery always writes an interesting, engaging story, and "The Summer of Sunshine and Margot" was no exception.

First, I really liked the relationship between the book's main characters, sisters Sunshine and Margot. They were completely different both physically and emotionally, yet still supported each other through thick and thin without trying to change each other. Further, there seemed to be minimal jealousy between them in spite of Sunshine's effortlessness with men and Margot's career success. It was lovely to see such a positive example of a female relationship depicted on the page.

Bianca, Alec's mother and Margot's celebrity client, was also a really interesting character. She came across as flighty at first, but there was a lot more depth and sweetness to her than was immediately apparent. Bianca's flamboyant personality made a nice contrast to Margot and Alec's seemingly conservative natures, and ultimately I think she helped them grow closer in spite of their efforts to resist her matchmaking.

I enjoyed the progression of both of the primary romantic relationships as well. Alec and Margot were a really good match because they helped each other come out of their shells. Sunshine and Declan also seemed like a good match. Sunshine finally found someone who saw her for the special person she was inside, not just for her sexy exterior, and Declan found a loving woman who wouldn't take him or his son for granted as his late wife seemed to do. It was great to watch Sunshine slowly gain confidence through her studies and her burgeoning relationship with Declan and his son.

Overall, I really liked this book and look forward to Ms. Mallery's next publication.

*ARC provided by the publisher via Edelweiss in exchange for an honest review.

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Sunday, June 9, 2019

Review: Teach Me

Teach Me Teach Me by Olivia Dade
My rating: 5 of 5 stars

I loved "Teach Me" by Olivia Dade. I always enjoy a slow burn romance, and this is a great one. Both main characters were well-developed and likeable, and I especially appreciated that while both Martin and Rose had a lot of baggage from their previous relationships, they dealt with it maturely and actually communicated with each other about it. They each let their partner know their needs, desires, and boundaries, and didn't let things build up into a huge, seemingly insurmountable obstacle near the end of the book.

Martin was a lovable beta hero, which made for a nice change of pace from the many alphas featured in the other books I've read lately. He was a great dad and his relationship with his daughter was really sweet. As for Rose, I loved how strong and independent she was, and that she wasn't afraid to stand up for herself. The progression of their relationship was really lovely, and I adored the promposal scene when Rose finally declared her feelings for Martin in public.

Overall, this was just a wonderful story, and I highly recommend it.

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Review: Fix Her Up

Fix Her Up Fix Her Up by Tessa Bailey
My rating: 2 of 5 stars

"Fix Her Up" is the first book I've ever read by Tessa Bailey. I was really looking forward to reading it based on the cute cover and description, but ended up being mostly disappointed.

On the bright side, the writing was very good, there were some amusing moments, and the characters were mostly likeable. Unfortunately, those positives were outweighed by several negatives, such as the fact that the fake relationship plan that forms the basis of the plot didn't make a lot of sense to me. Neither Georgie nor Travis really seemed to think the plan through. It seems to me that Travis's need for a more "family friendly" reputation would have continued even after he got the job as commentator for the Bombers, so breaking up with Georgie immediately after being offered the position didn't make much sense. If Travis went back to being a manwhore right after being hired, wouldn't he have been in danger of getting fired? His contract, like many others for jobs like that one, probably would have contained a "morals clause" that would have allowed the network to terminate him for any behavior that cast the network or team in a bad light.

As for Georgie, why would she think that dating Travis, or even having a boyfriend in general, would make people see her as more of a grown-up? (My 14 year old cousin has a "boyfriend" but I still don't consider her to be an adult!) If anything, given Travis's reputation as a womanizer, her decision to "date" him could have been interpreted as an example of Georgie's immature decision-making.

Then there was the relationship itself. I HATED that Travis called Georgie "baby girl." I cringed every single time he did it. The worst part? She actually liked his choice of pet name for her! It seems like a really belittling name for a woman who is trying to prove to everyone that she is an adult. Also, Travis really struggled with the idea of dating his best friend's younger sister, so why would he want to call Georgie by a nickname that emphasizes youth, and EXTREME youth at that?

That wasn't the only bothersome aspect of Travis and Georgie's relationship. Out of bed, I mostly liked the progression of their relationship (although Travis did seem to overcome his issues awfully quickly in the end IMO). In bed, however, I hated it. Travis was just way too dominant for my tastes, and Georgie's wide-eyed innocence didn't seem believable or likeable to me. This is a woman who, at the beginning of the book, had seemingly taken charge of her own sexuality - she had a vibrator named Dale and wasn't afraid to use it! I would have liked to see Georgie be less submissive, and to see Travis treat her as more of an equal rather than a child.

The sex scenes were plenty steamy, though, so they will certainly appeal to many readers. And as previously mentioned, the characters were mostly likeable. It would be fun to see some of the secondary characters, such as Georgie's sister Bethany, featured in future books. Overall, even though this book wasn't quite my cup of tea, I will still plan to check out more of Tessa Bailey's books in the future.

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Review: A Rogue by Night

A Rogue by Night A Rogue by Night by Kelly Bowen
My rating: 5 of 5 stars

I've heard good things about Kelly Bowen's books many times before, and I wish I hadn't waited so long to read one. I loved "A Rogue by Night"! It was such a refreshingly different take on historical romance, featuring a heroine (Katherine) who was not a member of the nobility, and a hero (Harland) who was an aristocrat but also chose to become a doctor. Harland and his family were considered to be "peculiar" by Society, but they did whatever they wanted to do anyway, and I loved them for it.

I thought the smuggling plot in this story was very interesting. When smuggling has been featured in previous books I've read, it has always been painted in a negative light because of the criminals, like King, who tended to get involved in it. It was very interesting to consider the motives of people like Katherine's family, who only turned to smuggling out of desperation and a need to support their families. They really had no other choice, especially in the wake of the Napoleonic wars when so many veterans returned home and there weren't enough jobs for all of them. They just did what they had to do to survive, despite the potential dangers.

I enjoyed how Katherine and Harland's relationship unfolded as well. They both had a lot of baggage from their previous relationships, but they managed to overcome it together. Harland stood up for Katherine when necessary, such as the times when he made others acknowledge that her medical skills were equal to his own, but he also let her have her independence. I appreciated that he didn't try to badger her into a relationship, but instead let her take the lead.

This book stood very well on its own, but I do plan to go back and read the first two books in this trilogy. I really enjoyed Ms. Bowen's writing style and look forward to checking out more of her work in the future.

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Review: A Fiery Escort for the Roguish Marquess: A Steamy Historical Regency Romance Novel

A Fiery Escort for the Roguish Marquess: A Steamy Historical Regency Romance Novel A Fiery Escort for the Roguish Marquess: A Steamy Historical Regency Romance Novel by Scarlett Osborne
My rating: 1 of 5 stars

Based on the description, I really thought I would enjoy "A Fiery Escort for the Roguish Marquess." It sounded like it might be a sort of historical "Pretty Woman" (hooker with a heart of gold meets a rich man and they fall in love), with some added intrigue thrown in to keep things interesting. Unfortunately, I ended up being very disappointed overall.

Details are incredibly important in a historical romance, and the author seems to have gotten a lot of them mixed up here. For example, hotels and hotel bars didn't exist during the Regency as she seems to have been envisioning them. There were lodging houses and coaching inns, but not hotels, as such, prior to the mid-19th century. Ernest and his friend Archie, as well as the baron, would probably have gone to a gentleman's club like Brooks or White's to play cards and drink in the evenings, not to a hotel. It would not have been particularly easy for Rachel, as a prostitute, to just waltz in and pick up a high class client like the baron. Women weren't allowed in gentleman's clubs. Given that Rachel's interaction with the baron was a relatively important part of the plot, I can see why the author wanted it to work the way she pictured it, but unfortunately, it just wasn't realistic.

Another major problem is that "escort" is too modern a term for prostitution; it was not widely used in this context until the 1920s/1930s, and was also likely American in origin, not British. I could have overlooked it if it were only used in the title of the book, but the word was used repeatedly, by many different characters in several situations, throughout the book. If the author really wanted to use a euphemism for "prostitute," she could have referred to Rachel as a "courtesan" instead, though what Rachel did was really too common for that. She was a prostitute, plain and simple. If the author didn't want to call her that, maybe she should have given her heroine a different profession (barmaid, perhaps?).

Then there is the alcohol the characters supposedly drank. There wouldn't have been any such thing as "cheap" brandy during the Regency - it was all imported from France or elsewhere in Europe, and a lot of times it had to be smuggled in due to high taxes and trade embargoes. Customers of the White Lion would have been drinking locally produced gin or ale because those were the cheap drinks of the early 19th century. And as for the baron's "fine French whisky"? It couldn't possibly have existed. There was no whisky produced in France until at least the 1980s!

Aside from the above mentioned (and other) historical inaccuracies, there were a lot of things about the plot didn't make sense. For example, Ernest says he loves and respects his father, yet seems to avoid him all the time and be afraid of him in some ways. Also, he acknowledges that his mother had a tendency to keep a lot of mementos from his childhood, so when he found the chest with Unity's things, why was it so strange to think that his mother would have kept those too? And how did he even know that the items had belonged to his sister? They easily could have been his mother's garments from her childhood. I can't accept that Ernest "just knew" his sister was alive as a jumping off point for the entire rest of the story. It's just not believable.

There is also the incredible coincidence of Rachel being best friends with the woman who turns out to be Ernest's long-lost sister. Again, it strains credulity. There are so many hints dropped about the woman's identity that you will see the "big reveal" coming from a mile away, too.

The one thing I did (somewhat) enjoy about this book was watching Ernest and Rachel fall in love. That said, I hated that Rachel continued to take clients while she was involved with Ernest. I get that she didn't want to take money from Ernest because she didn't want their relationship to be based on a transaction, but surely she could have let him help her in some other way, such as finding a more respectable job? Ernest never even offers, though, which is kind of disappointing. He does buy her 5 loaves of bread at one point, so there's that. (All Rachel ever seems to eat is bread. How she remains alive based on that diet is a mystery, but I digress.)

At any rate, given the number of historical inaccuracies and things that just don't make sense about the plot, I really can't recommend this book. I'm not sure I would read any of this author's future books either, unless I was sure that they had been better researched and edited.

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